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Ding Dong Open in new Window. [E]
silly poem for Halloween
by AmyJo-Christmas wishes Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Ha ha ha ha! I love it!

The title, brief description and genres work well. The cover pic is very cute! I like the layout of the poem, with the italics and the centering. The verse structure and words chosen tell the tale well.

The anecdotes you narrate are hilarious. Yes, kids are not used to someone opting for 'trick', or implying that if the 'trick' is to be played on them, the 'treat' should also, by rights, be given to them and not taken from them! I love the reward you got for your cleverness at the end of the poem!

While the poem works as is, you might consider adding color and some emojis like *Jackolantern2* or *Candy5* or others, to enhance the look.

Thank you for the *Laugh*
- Sonali

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