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Hallo! What a lovely tribute to a great man! The title, brief description and genres work for the poem. Maybe you could add 'Parenting' as a further genre. I like the rhyme scheme and verse structure. You've brought out various aspects of a good man, a hero to you. The emotions are well evoked. As you've mentioned, anyone who feels this way about their Dad can relate to your poem. SUGGESTIONS: 1. WritingML - font, size, line-space, center. 2. First verse, second line: 'Dad's' doesn't need an apostrophe, since it is plural. 3. The verse starting 'And 45' confused me a bit. Do you mean that as a father, you look to the advice your Dad once gave you while raising your own children? I'm not quite sure how to interpret that verse. 4. In the verse about having a way with words, you suddenly speak in second person. While this is fine, I did wonder if sticking to it from a son's point of view would make it more powerful. Thank you for sharing tis! - Sonali "October 2022 Reviews" "COMPLETED - Zombie Hair Pasta" (Black Case Review) My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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