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Review #4673460
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The Absence of Wavelength  [18+]
A nothing from nowhere cast his words to a world wide wind, hindered by periphery.
by ~Brian K Compton~
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Review by Mummified_Mike
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Hello! I'd like to offer a few thoughts about your poem. To me, it seems that you're making the point that we all end up in the same place, no matter what choices we've made and no matter how different they are to anyone else's. That place, seemingly, is the grave ["...dust to dust..."]. It certainly appears to fit as, no matter how aware we are of the consequences of the choices we've made, we cannot know what would have happened had we chosen differently. Likewise, we can never know the totality of our impact on those closest to us, to say nothing of society in general.

You put together a very thought-provoking poem. Thanks for sharing it.

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