A school adventure awaits but the student does not appreciate this opportunity for what reason? Did Pandora not understand the need for education for those who would be in public power as leaders? Why?

Babe is this Pandora's father or another family member? Annee knows what about this and feels how about this?

You have a good start for a story that can show interesting characters, scenes, and body language to show emotions. For example did Pandora frown, stomp her foot, clench her teeth, or fists because she was pouting and angry? Did she cross her arms and push out her lips snugly pressed together? How did she button her coat? Was she clumsy, rough, or something else? What was she thinking?

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WDC members.



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