First Thoughts: The first stanza established to form, mood, theme, and plot of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming word compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the plot forward at a good pace.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
My favorite part: The last line is my favorite, because it climaxed the poem with a lesson.
Final Thought: I am giving this well-written children's poem a 5.0, because children will enjoy reading and listening to it.
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