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 SHE>> Open in new Window. [E]
its all about her>>
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hallo!
This one showed up on Random Reads.

I like the metaphor and the emotion in the poem.
In a few short words, you've shown how important she is to you, and your feelings when she speaks. I like the simple layout, without any capital letters.
The title and brief description work.

SUGGESTIONS:
I think you need to pick 'poetry' as an item type, so that this shows up on searches for poetry.
Also, I'm wondering about the genres. Wouldn't you rather pick 'Romance/Love; Relationship; Personal ... ? Also, the word 'it's' in the brief description needs an apostrophe.

While the simple layout works, maybe a bit of WritingML like italics, font, line-space, size and centre would help enhance the look of the piece.

Questions - Is the > character in the title, brief description and text deliberate, or did it get there by mistake?

Is this a particular form of poetry?
If so, you may want to write a note at the end to say so.

Thanks for sharing this! *Smile*

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