\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
Printed from https://writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4669247
Review #4669247
Viewing a review of: {citem:}
Review of  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: | (5.0)
Access:  Public | Hide Review (?)
Your words show invisibility in your poem, but your poem shines brightly and you the writer are not invisible. I can picture you writing and enjoying the word journey. Your words work well together creating somber yet I feel hopeful feelings. It seems as if these words of yours were seeking visibility and hope for a bright future. I sniffed the perfume and in my mind, it seemed to have a spring scent of renewal. I guess my reactions to your poem are positive because I prefer to see the bright side of things.

I don't know of any way I would change your poem to make it better. If you decided to add to it, I suggest delving more into feelings, and if possible show the bright side of things.

I really like the imagery you show through your words sharing feelings, smell, and actions

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WDC members..

*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!Open in new Window..
   *NoteR* You have not yet responded to this review. Ignore
Printed from https://writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4669247