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Story of a Cat Open in new Window. [E]
writing prompt: write a story about a cat in 55 words
by AmyJo-Christmas wishes Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Again, this one showed up on random reads.

Ha ha ha ha ha!!!
I just love it! *Cat*

I love the whole picture of the cat you paint with your words. I chuckled at the phrase 'obliged to do', since it brought to mind this cat who HAS to be this way - doing exactly what they want. I was toddling along nicely and then suddenly, the last line and a *Facepalm* and another chuckle!

Very well written. I'm also glad you mentioned the prompt at the end, since that enhanced the poem for me.

I would suggest adding 'comedy' as a genre, since it is definitely funny. Also, maybe change the font to 'comic', increase the size and linespacing, and if you think you'd like to, try using some emoticons like *PawPrints* *Cat2*

Meow On!
Cat sig for power


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