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Review #4668572
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 Haiku-Winter Open in new Window. [E]
changing weather
by LinnAnn -Book writer Author Icon
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Review by StephBee Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Reading* THE POEM

A poem about the changing weather.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

The poem, on it's face, tells the tale of changing weather, but upon introspection, hints at changing emotions that humans deal with as well.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This a Haiku. A Haiku is a traditional short form of Japanese poetry that engages the reader using a cutting word (kireji) Here, I would say that word is "harsh." There is a 5,7,5 syllable pattern.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

I have no suggestions for improvement. The poem is easy to read and encourages the reader to go a little deeper.

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