"JULY 2022 challenge!"  

This one showed up on 'read and review'.
I was intrigued by HTTYD! 'How To Train Your Dragon'!

The brief description is great. You've said it's 'incomplete' but I'm reviewing it anyway, since it has been more than a month since you last modified it.

You've set the conflict up clearly and well. The characters, their motives and their characteristics are well spelt out. I was just wondering if, when you expand this, you'd intersperse the 'told' information with some 'showing' as this seems like a lot of information given together.

Write On!
- Sonali

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .