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 A snowman cares about our memory water Open in new Window. [ASR]
We melt into pastels, ooze onto wove-tight canvas, dry in the vaults of minds,
by Kåre เลียม Enga Author Icon
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hallo Kåre เลียม Enga Author Icon
This one showed up on 'read and review'.

I love it! I love the imagery and the emotions. I specially admire the choice of words to evoke the different phases - the smoothness of 'melt', the stickiness of 'ooze' and so on. (I'm guessing this is onomatopoeia but am not quite sure *Blush*.)

I had to smile at the irony of the snowman, soon going to melt, being the one representing 'forever'. That packs a real punch.

Thank you for the explanatory note at the end. This is something new to me and it's fascinating.

I don't really feel qualified to review this, but I'm just letting you know what I felt as a reader.

Write On!
Sonali

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