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 The Pumpernickel and the Pickle Open in new Window. [ASR]
A rhyming poem - a love story about a tattooed guy and a sandwich girl.
by Tim Chiu Author Icon
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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WDC decided that I randomly review
This poem so handsomely penned by you.

Or, keyed in, in this day and age
It's the computer, not pen on a page.

Anyway I'm glad you shared this little write
On our glorious online home, our writing site.

The title and description gave me a giggle
The poem's about two people, ready to mingle

But all mixed up, caught in between
Are slices of bread with a filling that's a dream

So - is it the beauty that attracts, or the snack?
Does the delicious bite make up for every other lack?

This little write left me feeling so good
It's all about love, togetherness ... and FOOD!

*Laugh*

Write On!
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