"The WDC Angel Army" 
"JULY 2022 challenge!"  

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Wow.
You've really packed a punch in a few short lines.
Yes, life can be quite arbitrary and illogical ... which is why I guess people try to find various explanations to make sense of it.

I like how you mix the positive-negative, sort of feels like random throws of a dice. My favourite bit is the phrase 'happy destiny', I think that totally summarises what you are saying.

The title, brief description and genres work for the poem. For the layout, while it works, I'd suggest center, font, size and line-spacing to enhance the impact of your words.

Thanks for sharing this!
Write On!


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