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THE HILLS THAT I CALL HOME Open in new Window. [E]
Lyrics playing a game in my head.
by Monty Author Icon
Review by StephBee Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.


*Reading* THE LYRIC

Home is where the Heart is in the Green Mountains of Vermont.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I loved the refrain. It's so heartwarming. I can hear the musically in my head as I read the refrain.

*Star* STRUCTURE

There are 2 stanzas and a refrain to the lyric.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The lyric is easy to read and understand.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

I loved the honest voice. It really connects with the reader.

Reviewed by StephB for the Angel Army.
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