The title and brief description work for the poem. I'd suggest adding a couple more genres. While the layout works as is, maybe you'd like to try adding colour and changing the font.
The poem itself is very powerful. The contrast between the shadow and the light is well brought out. The words chosen give both, imagery and emotion.
I appreciate the note at the conclusion, explaining the poetic form used.
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