"The WDC Angel Army" 
"JULY 2022 challenge!"  

The piece evoked the moment - the descriptions brought the scene to life, and the gentle tone brought forth the feelings. I appreciate the links given at the conclusion, though I've only clicked the main one so far.

I found no technical errors.

My suggestion would be where you've left item type and genres at 'other' - do pick some, so people know what to expect and so your work gets more exposure on site.

Thanks for sharing this!
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