This lovely verse showed up on Read and Review.

You create a beautiful, tranquil image of a childhood filled with joyous moments. I could picture the scene and feel your pleasure.

Suggestions:
1. You may want to look at the title and brief description, I think there's some confusion there with maybe the subject line of a forum post.
2. You could pick three genres, to give this poem more exposure on site, as 'other' doesn't show up on lists.
3. In the fifth line, I'd suggest changing it to 'I'd roam', to standardise the tense.

Thanks for sharing this one!
Write On!


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