Hallo!
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To begin with, I'll say that I am not familiar with the song 'Winter Wonderland', so I found it on You Tube and listened a bit, to get the lilt. Thanks for introducing me to a lovely song!

The title, brief description, cover pic and genres work well to hint at what's coming in the lyrics. I like the note on top, too, giving the context.

What a lovely way to contrast the world outside with the little circle of friendship! The verse structure and words evoke the snug, cozy feeling beautifully.

My only suggestion would be to use some WritingML to enhance the appearance of this piece.

Thanks for sharing this one!
Write On!


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