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A Union of Two Open in new Window. [13+]
A Declaration
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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This one showed up on Read and Review, and I'm glad it did!

What a lovely declaration! In a few simple, powerful words, you bring out the essence of true love in its myriad aspects. What a real union means and what can be achieved when one is part of a real union. Beautifully done! *Inlove2*

Suggestions:
1. You've classified this as 'prose' but the layout seems to imply a poem ... ? If you're okay with that, it's fine.
2. I think some WritingML like font, size, italics, centre and maybe even colur, would enhance the impact of your words.

Thank you so much for sharing this!
Write On!
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