Reviewed by a member of "The WDC Angel Army" 

Hallo!
This one showed up on Read and Review.

You've created quite a powerful image in the span of just 40 words, and I actually got chills as I read this.

Suggestions:
a. You have changed from past tense to present tense mid way, is that deliberate or would you like to standardise it?
b. Do you mean 'Staring' at the cell phone?

Overall impression:
This short poem left me both chilled and confused.
Am I missing some symbolism somewhere, of the five dollar bills on the cotton? If so, maybe a note in explanation ... ?

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