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Autumn. Open in new Window. [E]
A very small poem about Autumn.
by The Crossing .. Author Icon
Review of Autumn.  Open in new Window.
Review by StephBee Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

The poem evokes a visual of the autumn climate.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked the complexity of the last line, autumn is for all but don't expect it to be pleasant, at least, that's my take.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a 3 line poem.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling, punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to make the font bigger and easier to read.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

I have no suggestions for improvement. The poem evokes a visual of the wetness/dampness of the season.

Reviewed by StephB
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