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Review #4663446
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Haiku and Senryu Collection Open in new Window. [E]
Collection of my Haiku and Senryu poems
by April Desiree-I'm back! Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "Hydrangea" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*BalloonR**ConfettiP*HI April! I am here with a review to celebrate you! *Star*

*Flowerb* What a clear vivid picture comparing two images in the present moment. I liked the move from "growing" to barking". At first I thought the hydrangea was barking so maybe a dash after "growing" would serve to delineate better. The great surprise twist of the dog barking and breaking branches. Our pup likes to lay down under our bushes! LOL

*Dog1* I liked the soundscape created with the repeated b sounds. The form follows a traditional haiku format well and you use phrases at first. In haiku one tries to avoid sentences, *Wink*

*Flowerw* I could so relate to the experience you shared. Thanks for honouring the haiku form in your way.

Light on the path as you write on!!*Star*

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