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Given: Jun 17, 2022 at 7:05pm
Length: 937 Characters |
929 w/o WritingML
That is one holy terror of a kid. Brat doesn't even begin to describe him, but when it comes to a description of Derrick you did a great job. But you didn't just describe him, telling us he was a brat. You showed us the oh-so-many ways that this kid was a brat. I feel for the cat. In this case, I think it was the black cat that was unlucky.
I don't have kids and fortunately, my nieces and nephews live far enough away that I have never had the "fun" of helping watch over a birthday party. Though if I ever made the mistake of joining them for a birthday party I know it would be bad. My sister has six kids of her own, that is before you start adding in any guests. I also would have nowhere to escape to because I would probably be staying with them in their house.
I would still offer you the advice that you gave Derrick, at least you have family that can provide you with these experiences not everyone does.
You responded to this review 06/17/2022 @ 8:02pm EDT
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