My name is Beacon and I will be reviewing your item.

I have to agree what you said in the poem. There are times, I feel defeated because of my life but I do try to stay positive too. What drew me to your poem, it said courageous and I thought about my life and I'm glad I had the courage to get through the situations I was in along the years.

I honestly didn't see any errors in the poem.
Thank you for sharing the poem,
Beacon