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Home of the High Rank Fairies Open in new Window. [13+]
House of the High Rank Fairirs
by GERVIC Author Icon
Review by ruwth Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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May God bless both of us as we grow as writers together!


"Ultimate Adventurers GroupOpen in new Window. has me reviewing your item today! *Wink*

Well, actually, I am doing "Entrance Task #2...Open in new Window. from "The Open Scroll [Entrance Task]Open in new Window.. It has me writing five reviews. They each have to be 1000 characters long (excluding WritingML) and I must also include a link to "Ultimate Trinket Adventure [Mainland]Open in new Window. within the review.


"Home of the High Rank Fairies" is impressive to say the least! Wow!

First Things First

You could make the "High Rank Fairies line divider" clickable and let it take your readers to this amazing display. A clickable image would take folks to "Home of the High Rank FairiesOpen in new Window. from the Mainland or any other place you chose to display it.

You have this explanation on "Ultimate Trinket Adventure [Mainland]Open in new Window.:

"These are fairies who live in the Magical Mainland Castle and are tasked to do certain functions. Some are volunteers of this activity. These are the fairies whom the Master Adventurer is most grateful of."

I would suggest putting this statement at the top of this webpage with a minor change: "These are fairies who live in the Magical Mainland Castle and are tasked to do certain functions. Some are volunteers of this activity. These are the fairies for whom the Master Adventurer is most grateful." That last sentence is slightly reworded.


Rolling List of Names

The rolling list is cool. I don't know how to do that. The only thing is that I did not realize it was a rolling list. At first, I thought you only had a couple names listed there. I would like to learn how to create a rolling list on a webpage, though. You show some talent on this page for a bit of web-design. Clicking on the username does take me to their section of this page.


Changing Background

Another thing I do not know how to do: the background color changes from black to white. That is an eye-popping feature. Perhaps you should teach a class!


Something Interesting

The photos display the same on all my screens. Also interesting, the words "Click to view contribution" can only be seen with the white background since the black color of the letters blends in with the black background. Also, the background inside the photo light box also changes from black to white. I am intrigued.





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