Wow! This is such a romantic acrostic for Valentine's Day. Your details on loving elements of relationship are well conceived and vivid.
The Acrostic format is effectively created with theme appropriate words for each first letter. Good for you on the N and V : I find they can be tricky! I like the old word "Vintage" as it is evocative of a long love.
I was impressed too that you used rhyme as an element to the form. That can be a challenge as I too have done it! Your periods on every line made each point equal time and emphasis. The images of embers and glances and whimsy are lovely descriptions. As I read aloud I noticed some lovely sound elements in repeated letters that added to the flow of the work. Good job.
I enjoyed reading your poem with its personal voice that draws the reader to remember their own experiences of love. Wonderful creation to celebrate the day. Thanks for sharing your gift and well crafted acrostic!
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