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Erin the Fair  [E]
Limerick for a pretty lass
by Nobody’s Home
Review of Erin the Fair  
Review by Cubboo!
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, Nobody’s Home, I am reviewing this today as one of two judges for the "Writing 4 Kids Contest " . Please do not edit your limerick until after the winners are announced! Thank you! *Smile*

*Pencil* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

*Boxcheckb* Visually appealing Nice!
*Boxcheckb* Easy to understand Yes

*Crayons4* First Impression Great limerick! Loved the appearance of it, too—the color, the font, the bold text. And your cover!

*Crayons7* Meter: Perfection. *Smile* Awesome!

*Crayons* Rhyme: Excellent.

*Crayons3* Flow: Bouncy and fun.

*Crayons5* Technicalities:

*Bullet* Don't forget to include your line count (or word count for stories) next time. *Wink* Other than that, I found no typos at all! And your prompt note was so well organized! *Smile*

*Crayons2* Favorites:

Leaving her fam'ly dispairin'. Love this! *Bigsmile*

*Crayons8* Final thoughts: You've managed to tell a story in a five-line limerick! You've done a great job.

Best of luck in the contest!


Have a great day and...*Quill*
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