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Scale the scale Open in new Window. [E]
Gluttony and the results
by Sherasi Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Sun*Greetings Sherasi. I am happy to celebrate You with a review on behalf of "Poetry Review Garden [on hiatus]" Open in new Window..


*Flowerr* This poem was fun to read. The title is evocative and the images of how you feel about the food you describe. The flow was lively with a happy vibration. I could feel the let down of the sigh at the last line. *Laugh*

*Dragonflyb* The flow and rhyme were effective and the pace was quick. I could sense the hunger and joy for food of the speaker. Good use of active verbs like "vanish" and repeated sounds like "pasta penne" added flavour to the soundscape.

*Star* Thanks for sharing this entertaining poem that in a fun way portrays the issue with scales and food! I am so glad I never had that issue. It can be tough according to my sister. *Wink*

Write on in your style!
eyestar
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