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This one showed up on Random Reads, and I'm so glad it did. The title, brief description and genres work for your piece. The verse structure and rhyme scheme are apt, as are the words chosen for the tone.

What a beautiful poem!

I love the personification of the reflection, and the way it speaks to the person. The imagery and message come across clearly. My favourite part is the last six lines, where the roles are reversed. By doing this, you reinforce that one can never lie to oneself as one is both, the support and the supported, at the same time, neither can hide from the other.

My only suggestion would be for a bit of Writing Ml. I think font, size, centre, italics and line-space might enhance the message give.

Thank you for sharing this lovely piece!
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