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 Empire of Living Shadows Excerpt Open in new Window. [GC]
Opening Chapter of my Novel, Empire of Living Shadows ( Currently submitted to Agents)
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Rated: GC | (5.0)
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Nicely done,the fact that she is forced to the floor says that it was unexpected.Shannon reads as a non-believer and now is regretting it.The Hatman is beautifully designed after what seems to be an English gentleman, i could see him saying "like sheep to the slaughter".

Grats on the agent, i suggest you give the Hatman a book(Shannon's timeline vs his)
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