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![]() | Promptly Poetry Challenge 2021-22 ![]() Rd 2 for Lilli's weekly prompts. My muse will need a S'bux gift card for this one. ☕️ ![]() |
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Impressive! I enjoyed the language and vibe of the expression and on first scan did not notice the acrostic form I was so into the poem. Thanks for the note at the bottom. ![]() ![]() It has a romantic air with intense emotional potency. The conversation between the lovers is vivid and the first speaker so desperate and pleading and she ready to captivate. Reminds me of a sonnet especially with the lovely language. It is easy to hear the emotions. ![]() The form of the acrostic is effective and well constructed with a coherent flow and appealing words for each beginning letter. Great find for the letter X and suggestive of that eternal ideal. ![]() I think the way you use the language gave a sense of old time and place. Beginning lines with "Else" and "Replied the maid" got my attention too! ![]() I enjoyed the poem and found no glitches to throw me out of the vision. The language suit the emotion, content and romantic theme and punctuation was purposeful. The dialogue was clearly marked so no confusion as to who was speaking. I enjoyed the flair when you change order of words about like in "Else suffer I must"! It gave the work a distinct vibe. ![]() ![]() Intensity shone forth and I was lured into the romantic scene. I could imagine it clearly and felt both parties. The contrast of their tones was effective. Felt like Shakespeare! ![]() ![]() ![]() Write on in your unique way! eyestar
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