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Shoes Open in new Window. [E]
A poem for the Writing 4 Kids Contest
by LorenIsOneOfMyNames Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Greetings, LorenIsOneOfMyNames, I am reviewing this today as a judge for the "Writing 4 Kids Contest " Open in new Window.. This is one of fourteen entries for the January Round.

*Pencil* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

*Boxcheckb* Visually appealing
*Boxcheckb* Easy to understand
*Boxcheck* Followed the prompt & rules

*Crayons4* First Impression: This would be a fun piece for an illustrator. *Smile* Lots of room for the imagination. Good flow, too.

*Crayons5* Technicalities: This really isn't a technicality, but something to think about: The line Memory molds didn't strike me as something a child might understand. I understand, of course, but perhaps a child might not? Just a thought. *Wink*

*Crayons2* Favorites:

Big shoes,
small shoes,
everywhere you look,
shoes.
Fancy shoes,
dancing shoes,
running, climbing, hiking shoes.
Worn out and brand new shoes.

Great way to begin!

*Crayons8* Final thoughts: Fun piece! I hope to see more entries from you in the future! Best of luck in the contest. *Smile*

Have a great day and...*Quill*
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !
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