First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.
First Impression/What I liked
You really are good at writing pieces like this, Ruwth! I stayed focused the entire time and grasped every word.
I'm so sorry you are going through this with your daughter. It's got to be tough. But your deep faith in God will pull you through.
I like that you don't push your beliefs. Your actions through your writing is a great example of your trust in God. And your signature is a good reminder for all of us!
Suggestions to Consider
I have no suggestions! Great job!
Final Thoughts
It's amazing how you first planned on writing this piece on texting but were led to write about your signature. Best of luck, Ruwth. I have no doubt your faith will get you through.
Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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