Hello Shubh

Greetings from "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" !

That's something to be called classy! A real classy poem!

A fan of your purple paradise, sir. The ending was smooth. Save for the commas here and there, everything was just nicely placed to form this amazing piece.

I had a word, sir. This looks like a forced rhyme. Bringing a suggestion-

"Treachery, my people have never known.
Everywhere and everything around,they own."

I wish to go see the purple paradise but obviously not now, sir. ;)

My favourite lines-

"If you do not get a chance to meet me and stand by my side
We are sure to meet in Purple Paradise where our kingdom resides"

I can tell you honestly, that I am a fan of rhymes and yours is the one, I truly appreciate. Probably, the best of your collection. ;) Thanks for writing this. I suggest you to give this is a try in some of the contests here - namely, Test Your Poetry and Newbie Challenge. It will be a sure success, sir.



Keep Writing,
Regards,
Lurie.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .