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another puppy poem
by Lou-Here By His Grace Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Lou,
this is a cute puppy poem. Sounds like a ditty. Puppies are so engaging.
The one in the rhyme is like a small kid. Its actions are like those of a toddler.
Rhyming rolls away with ease. Keen observation of the puppy’s movements finds apt expression in the poem.
It is persuasive enough for me to go get a puppy of my own.

It flows well with a set rhyme scheme and visual imagery that appeals.

Write on!
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