Hello Jillian,
I found this traditional poem cited in the side lines. I was attracted by the description. I was not disappointed.
I like the idea of phoenix rising out of several things.
“An old house being repainted….”

We just got our house repainted and I appreciate the “hue”.
This poem consists of things practically observed as the imagery and the tone indicate.
Life teaches us earthy sense, can’t always be flying in the clouds. Yet, the romantic you makes itself felt.

Your message is as good as the rest of the poem.
The last line has a word “g9one”, which sounds odd.

Write on!








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