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 Mother Open in new Window. [E]
This is a poem about Mother Nature.Tribute to Earth Day.Free verse.
by Jillian Montgomery Author Icon
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Review by sindbad Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi
Jillian Montgomery

This is a unique poem and gives reader a whole spectrum of roles earth does for its dwellers to correctly call and refer to it as a mother. The creative lines like- Every child's laughter snow angel melts a cold spot in my heart
But this makes unnessary ice floes melt. Though there are some spelling errors that can be removed once you finish drafting. Overall a great poem that touches all the reader's... sindbad

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