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 A Work So Humbling Open in new Window. [E]
"While time is moving in the trenches,/ I shall dig the foul stenches" - a poem.
by Tim Chiu Author Icon
Review by sindbad Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi
Tim Chiu

This is a nice and creative poem on job security of a worker in capitalism. The way you presented the opening paragraph and all the expectations and impurities to all challenges. The ending with forever face these skies of gray indeed is wide reaching and creative. Overall reading this poem was a humbling experience..sundbad

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