Hi
Author Joseph J. Madden

This is a nice and interesting adventure you have written here with all the melodrama to make it a block buster. L did go through the story once all the mystical creatures and orb do keep the story exciting and refreshing. I did feel there was some drag on need for action. I am sure this story is just a sequel some adjustments will make a great and refined story..sindbad


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .