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 Elephant Race Open in new Window. [E]
The running of the elephants.
by Don Two Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi
Don Two

This is a short piece that is indeed a nice projection of your mind. A elephant race with nice and perfect sorrounding. Rhino being the refree and the way different trunks are captured. All this and the scads of coconut enhances the reading experience. I felt the sentence rhinos watched along with gnus...a rhino watching along with a group of antelope was creative indeed..sindbad

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