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 Daystar Open in new Window. [E]
This is one of the older poems/songs I still have. Written during the George W. era.
by StrangelyColouredDog Author Icon
Review of Daystar  Open in new Window.
Review by sindbad Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi
StrangelyColouredDog

This is a nice and creative take on Daystar. You did have a idea and purpose while drafting this poem as l could follow the sequential unfolding of events and their perfect expression here. Overall this poem is important for the whole humanity to refrain from destructive urges and focus on creativity..sindbad

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