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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Bedrock - The Lurker King

This is a nice and interesting introduction and can certainly become a popular story. I certainly liked your obsession with Mordecai, however try to mould your character with the upcoming plot and you will certainly see the transformation... sindbad

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