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 A Moral Objective: A Vacant Tomorrow Open in new Window. [E]
Living a lucid theory of existence - a spirit of gloom - a poem.
by Tim Chiu Author Icon
Review by sindbad Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi
Tim Chiu

This is a nice and rather hard hitting poem on morals and their predicament. You chose a perfect title about refering a vacant tommorow and the things society is overlooking to reach this state. This poem motivates to look for a cause and bring about the upliftment of our moral objective.. Sindbad

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