This is a really interesting topic and way of looking at it. I wasn't sure what to expect when the genres said it was Adult, Erotic, and Opinion. But you did a great job of describing things and piecing together your idea to sell us on something we probably have never thought about before. Nicely done!

Correction: The only mistake I noticed was a spelling mistake in "Men are blown away by the gift, or presense, of women." I did google in case that was a British spelling or something, but I don't think it is, in which case, that should be "presence."

Otherwise, you did a great job with this piece. I really enjoyed it! My favorite line was "How its slender shapely form glides and saunters its way through life as if to some visionary symphony, unyieldingly entertaining an audience of the mind incessantly."

Thank you for sharing your opinion. Keep it up! You have interesting ideas and the talent to share them.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .