This is a great list of phrases to use to show different emotions. I am currently taking the Show don't Tell class, so finding this was a good reminder for me.
One thing that I notice in this bulletin and in the materials in the class: showing includes a lot of adjectives. It appears that the adjectives police is wrong about them. Without adjectives, the writing would go into tell instead of show. Without adjectives, there wouldn't be any way at all to describe what the reader should see or feel when she reads.
Nice font, good size, and good use of bold and underline to give the item structure.
Annette
You responded to this review 07/12/2021 @ 2:30pm EDT
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