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Review #4618461
Viewing a review of:
Snow's Writing for 2019, 2020, & Beyond  [13+]
This book holds the items for the contest I enter in 2019, 2020, and beyond.
by Prosperous Snow celebrating
         Review for entry/chapter: "Unspoken Love" 
Review by Cubboo! (22!)
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Greetings, Prosperous Snow celebrating! I am reviewing this because I am part of "Merit Badge Exchange" . *Smile*

*Quill* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.


What I Liked

         *Bullet* Fabulous flow
         *Bullet* The Sedoka poetry form guidelines were followed perfectly. You've written the two different perspectives nicely plus I loved the visual of the crocked smile! Nice touch. *Smile*
         *Bullet* Whether this was an easy piece for you to create, or not, you made it seem like it was. Lovely!


Suggestions to Consider

         *Bullet* I have no suggestions.


Final Thoughts

         I absolutely love this! Nice work and best of luck in the contest, Neva! *Heart*


Have a great day and...*Quill*
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !
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