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What an unusual story. A thief who decides to put the loot back because he's not sure how to spend it. Then, although his original plan never came to fruition, he ended up going to his dream location after all - and all of that in a legal way.

Mr. Rice was rightfully fired. Who leaves out such a large sum of money and does so with a frequency that makes other employees think there will be more chances to steal it? Ha! So funny.

Good writing and unanticipated twist at the end. Well done.

Annette
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