What an interesting topic. I like the research quotes you added at the bottom for further information. I don't know that I agree that women fashion up for menfolk. Most women I know prefer to look good as a way to feel good. If that happens to be pleasing to someone else, bonus - but not the reason for wearing certain clothes or not.
The poem has a good structure and is easy to read in the sense that your spelling and grammar are on point. It is thought-provoking for sure.