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A Bushy-Tailed Intruder Open in new Window. [18+]
The most horrible rodent of all
by ♥HOOves♥ Author Icon
Review by Nixie 🦊 Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hi Hooves. *Smile* This is review #1 from my package at Sisco's auction.



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The Hook
I am terrified of squirrels with their bulging eyes and brash behaviour. One time at a rest stop, a squirrel stole a candy bar right out of my hand. So with the title and brief description you chose, reading this was a no-brainer. I also wanted to ensure we were talking about the same rodent. Even though bushy-tailed was a giveaway.

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A closer look
The unusual formatting was unexpected, but this was an easy read. The prompt words were sewn in seamlessly, no bumps along the way. I liked how the tension built sentence by sentence. You had my heart pounding.

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Emotions evoked
Maybe the most amusing part was your husband's reactions. Men. The back and forth dialogue delighted me. An amusing way to drive a plot. *Thumbsup* Men can drive a sane woman up the wall. And they clearly don't comprehend how to handle an upset wife. Laughter? Unforgivable. But, of course, they have the most logical course of action, which is so aggravating.

Excellent use of forewarning when you mentioned the 'thin' robe. I wondered where it would come into play. I thought maybe you'd get locked out, but, sorry, what really happened was even funnier. *Laugh* Nice neighbors, though.

Vivid descriptions allowed me to enter the scene as if I were there. Your sense of humour is sharp and witty.

I'm not comma queen, and I don't see the point in mentioning misplaced ones. This sentence is only to backup my rating.

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A closed book=lasting impression
Combining my personal connection and your experience definitely leaves a lasting impression in my mind. Well done.

~Nixie



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