Welcome to WdC from the "Newbie Welcome Wagon" Hello samirabonil Ah. This was different. It starts out with chocolate. Who can resist? Not me. Then, it becomes more personal. There is definitely an obsession in there. I like the last part where the flower owns the narrator. It's kind of sweet, bitter, irresistible - just like the best chocolates. I truly know nothing about poetry at all, but are you sure you need "to" here where I underlined it: Then all they ask to Is keep on staring
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